Tuesday, January 27, 2009

My first ever fic!!

A brief introduction about my story. Hope it is not a boring one for you guys. This story is about Jane, who involved in a complicated love story between two guys. Jay, her childhood best friend. Onew, the cute guy. Want to know more about what will happened with Jane, Vanessa, Jay and Onew? Stay with the story till the end.


The Past or Present?? Friend? Love?


Chapter 1: Just Another Memorable Day

It’s been a while since I had this chance. Fresh air!! Picturesque indeed. I need to forget all the past. All that happened is going to hurt me more if I keep on remembering it. Haizzzzz.. *sigh* Will everything going to be fine after this?

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“Jane! Wake up!!”

What!! What happened??

“Hey! You need to wake up before I kick you out of the bed! Jane!!”

“I’m soo sleepy, Van. Can’t I sleep a bit more while??”

“NO!! Wake up!! You promise me to go out with me today. Come on!! Where’s your promise??”

Aish. This girl ah. Cannot let me sleep in peace. Haizzz.. I totally forgot about today. Yay.. Why did I promise her the other day.

“Okay. As I promise. Let me get ready. 20 minutes please!!”

“10 minutes!!”

“Aish. 15 minutes!!”

“Okay. Be fast!! I need to buy lots of stuff. Hehehe..”

Huh.. What an evil smile she had.

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“Hey, Van. Do I miss out something here? Did I invite Jay as well?”

“Yearp!! You did invite him. Why you didn’t remember?? Are you ok??”

“Sorry. All the works and assignments make me totally a forgetful person. ”

“Yerrrr.. How could you. I think today going to be fun. It’s been a while since we three best friend go out together. ”

“Hello, ladies!! I’m glad to see both of you. WoW!! I think we rarely seen each other nowadays. Jane, your hair is longer than before. Van, I think you lose some weight. Thank God you invite me today. It’s nice to be around both of you. Hehe..”

Just like what Van said earlier, today is extremely a great day. Together with my two best friend. I never imagine a better day than spend my precious time with Van and Jay. They are my childhood best friend. It’s been 15 years they stay by my side. Since I’m the youngest, they sometimes treat me like a small child. Jay is one year older than Van and me. Even though he’s the oldest, when he was upset it’s hard to persuade him. Van, she is like my older sister since I’m the only child in my family. Her parents were a good friend of my parents. She’s been living with me after both her parents past away in a tragic accident while we both still in kindergarten. Ever since that, my whole family accepts her with open hearted and treats her like our own family.

Hurmmm.. Jay..

“Jane!! What are you day dreaming about??”

“Huh?? Nothing. Just thinking about my assignments.”

“Aish. Girl, take a break. Could you rest just a day? Give your brain some rest.”

“Okay, Van UMMA!!”

“Aish. Stop calling me that!! AHJUMMA!!HAHAHA!!”

“Okay!! We’ll see who will score better in Korean test next week. We’ll see..”

“Nyah!! I’m going to beat you. I will score 100!!”

“Wooo!! Ladies.. Come on!! It’s late. We better get going.”

“OKAY!!”

Both I and Van laugh at the same time.

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End of Chapter One

Well, the main purpose I write because just for fun and to improve my English.. hOhO..

So, what do think?? leave some comment please..

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

haluuuuu
karen ko pnya karyaka ni?
best ow..
tapi pa endingnya?hu3 menanti-nanti ni sya endinya ah..hik3

Anonymous said...

yo karen..ujung bulan ni bfday beth..pa kita mau wat..hik3

F4T28 said...

hehe..
love story ba nie..
hahaha..
xda keja kan..
nanti sy post lg..

ya kan..
bday dia..
ari rabu lar tu..
full kelas ba sy..
pa ko nya idea??

Anonymous said...

kita sambut kat bilik diala...
xpala sehari@ 2 ari lewat cam2 kita kenakan dia..
kalu rabu tu dia sendry pun xda kat bilik dia..dia ada lab 2 ptg.gpun sy pun kelas bi malam rabu 2.
amcm?

Anonymous said...

wh..karen..jd writer pl dh ko skrng.syok la crita ko karen.tp apa la jd? t'gntung trus crita 2.

Anonymous said...

karennnnnnnnnnnnnn mau tau pa ending tu crita..cepat kasi habis bah...hu3...mau tau444

F4T28 said...

wakaka.. sabar eh.. chapter nie sampai 12 or 15 kali.. aku da siap sampai chapter 10 ka.. wahaha.. nanti aku upload chapter 3.. hehe.. sabar2..